I am very proud of this render. It took me about an hour and then the computer had to render it for about 3 hours.
I am also happy with the title I picked for it, i think it fits well
Well the piece in general is kinda kool, but I don't think your using it to its full potential in some areas. The material looks iffy... I would use a pure color metallic or something... also maybe a little bright light source. Your title and name also are obstrusive, so I would suggest bottom or top left corners for that. Other then that I am not sure how else I can be constructive.. If you know exactly how you did this (meaning not totally random fidleling) then i would say try start over to hone your skills.