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. I really enjoyed the time of its creation and I am relativly happy with the outcome.
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Anyways, I have a few points here... the star intensity just needs to be toned down a little bit. You have really, seriously pushed the "vastness" scale here, and that is excellent. There are large stars, small stars, stars with flares on them, just every type and I am really getting a sense of depth here. Nice work overall, just the only thing is that the nearest stars need to be a LIIIITTLE less bright. Other than that, great work.
Once again, work on planet texturizing. Sharpening filter is great for scaling down and keeping that detail, but don't overuse it.
And I am really diggin the rings
Great work man, keep improving on your technique
-Scott
As for your newest piece: "We are all gonna die."
In case of composition, I don't like much when the intensive sharp starfield is covered with defined space "clouds". It's better to decide in advance when planning the composition what type of selestial scene it will be: specific nebula, poor dark space or astronomical photo-like. And don't forget about conception\general idea of your work - without it everything will look chaotically and, thus, simply boring.
Well, I like the rings.
Wish you the best results in future!
Background starfield is still intensively monotone, so this kills the feeling of the volume.
But don't worry much. I think you will manage better every time, improving your skills. Just rely on personal feelings when you're trying to construct the future image in your head. Concentrate on what you really want to achieve, to show the viewer. And a lot of premeditated practise.
yeah, I like how the rings turned out also
Cheers,
Markian